概要：There are many things you should do. First, I’m afraid you’re wrong to be late for class, so you should get up early in the morning and get to school on time. And you should go to bed earlier at night. Before going to bed, you should put away your school things. If you do so, I’m sure you will become a happy student.Your friend小试牛刀：假如你叫John，请用下面所提供的信息写篇短文，告诉你最好的朋友Mary你的烦恼。内容提要：这几天，你发现同学们对你不太友好。上个星期六，班上的一位同学举行生日聚会，他邀请了很多同学，但没有邀请你。你感到很烦恼，于是向她倾诉此事，并向他征求意见。（80词左右）__________________________
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There are many things you should do. First, I’m afraid you’re wrong to be late for class, so you should get up early in the morning and get to school on time. And you should go to bed earlier at night. Before going to bed, you should put away your school things. If you do so, I’m sure you will become a happy student.
Your friend
小试牛刀：
假如你叫John，请用下面所提供的信息写篇短文，告诉你最好的朋友Mary你的烦恼。
内容提要：这几天，你发现同学们对你不太友好。上个星期六，班上的一位同学举行生日聚会，他邀请了很多同学，但没有邀请你。你感到很烦恼，于是向她倾诉此事，并向他征求意见。（80词左右）
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Unit 3 What were you doing when the UFO arrived?
一、单元分析
本单元以What were you doing when the UFO arrived?为话题，要求学生学会运用过去进行时态和when、while引导的状语从句来讨论过去发生的事情，并学会讲故事，同时了解一些自然科学知识和社会科学知识，从而更加热爱科学，迸发探索科学的热情。
重点词汇：bathroom, bedroom, kitchen, bought, land, got, while, experience, imagine, strange, follow, amazing, climb, jump, shout, rode, ran, anywhere, met, happen, accident, plane, heard, modern, kill, murder, bright, playground, bell, rang, told, close, silence, meaning, became, earth, hero, flew
重点句型：1. What were you doing when the UFO arrived?
2. While the boy was walking down the street, the UFO landed.
3. I had a very unusual experience on Sunday.
4. I followed it to see where it was going.
5. The station was crowded and Linda couldn’t see Davy anywhere.
二。 教师指导
a. 本单元的写作指导：本单元主要是练习描述一件事。在写这样的文章时，首先要确定写作要点，即通过分析“我”经历的一件事来构思文章。然后尽量使用自己熟悉的词、词组及句子来表达以保证语法逻辑的正确性和语言的简洁性。
b.常用句型：
（1） It was sunny that day.
（2） The whole class went to the park last weekend.
（3） While some girls were singing and dancing, some boys were playing soccer.
（4）Though we were tired, we felt very happy.
c.本单元体裁的写作指导：本单元的写作要求需要注意的问题：这类作文段落要清晰，多用过去时态描写。主要应涉及：
1.介绍事件发生的时间、地点；
2.可以介绍当时的天气情况；
3.描写最令人难忘的时刻以及当时你在做什么；
4.多用第一人称I 或 we 描述；
5.最后表达一下自己的感受。
三、范文赏读
你和同学之间发生过许多趣事吧。请任举一例和我们分享一下吧。请以An Interesting Experience为题写一篇短文。词数要求在80词以上。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
An Interesting Experience
Last weekend all my classmates go to the park. The weather was fine .There were many green trees and beautiful flowers. The park looked very beautiful.
While some girls were singing and dancing, some boys were playing soccer. Still others were playing chess under the trees.
We went boating after lunch and then climb the hills. The hills were very high. When we reached the top , we were all tired.
When we went back to school, it was getting late. We were very happy!
点评：
上面的这篇习作正文的文章格式正确，作者充分利用课本所学知识的整体叠加，中心突出，内容充实。文章中的几处错误也是我们同学们容易犯的毛病，主要是词语运用不当。大家看看对于这几处错误如何更正？①此处为一般过去时态，应把go 改为went;②and 前后引导的时态要一致，所以climb 要改为climbed。
例文诵读：
20xx年，在中国发生了不少重大事件。请根据下面表格中的信息提示，描述当这些事件发生时，你在干什么。70-80词。
TimeEvents
2:28 pm, May 12th, 20xxA big earthquake happened in Wenchuan, Sichuan.
8:00 pm, August 8th, 20xxThe 29th Olympics opened in Beijing.
September 25th, 20xxShenzhou VII went into space.
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