概要：6. How long have you been writing in English?Name Q1Q2Q3Q4Q5Q6Bob 七岁大时两年前大约五年三年前半年20xxBob Seven years OldTwo years AgoAbout five yearsThree years AgoHalf a year20xxDear Editor,I am interested in the writer job. I have been listening to music videos since I was seven years old. I have been watching English movies since two years ago. I have been watching sports for about five years. I have been working as a writer since three years ago. I have been reading English newspaper for half a
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6. How long have you been writing in English?
Name Q1Q2Q3Q4Q5Q6
Bob 七岁大时两年前大约五年三年前半年20xx
Bob Seven years OldTwo years AgoAbout five yearsThree years AgoHalf a year20xx
Dear Editor,
I am interested in the writer job. I have been listening to music videos since I was seven years old. I have been watching English movies since two years ago. I have been watching sports for about five years. I have been working as a writer since three years ago. I have been reading English newspaper for half an year. And I have been writing in English since 20xx. I love writing. And I hope I can be a writer for our school newspaper.
Yours sincerely,
Bob
点评：
上面这篇习作正文格式正确，句型语法运用得当，内容充实，行文流畅，是一篇佳作，可圈可点的地方很多。具体来看，题目中的6个问题文章中都有具体回答，且正确的使用了现在完成进行时；另外个别单词、词组的使用是文章的亮点，如be interested in, since，for 的使用。
四、小试牛刀
Nick的美国笔友Bob向他询问他和妹妹Linda的业余爱好。假如你是Nick，请根据下面的表格给Bob写一封信介绍一下。词数：60-80（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数中）。
People Hobby How longHow many
Nick Collecting shells For five years About 220
Linda Collecting movie ticketsSince she was ten years old More than 350
Dear Bob,
I’d like to tell you about our hobbies.
Can you tell us about your hobby?
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Yours,
Nick
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nit 7 Would you mind turning down the music？
一、单元分析
1.本单元围绕“请求及歉意”这一话题展开教学，学习婉转提出请人帮忙的请求方式以及在生活中遇到不顺心不如意的事情生气的时候提出的请别人帮忙，以此培养学生交际能力。
本单元是在已学习Could you please sweep the floor?请求别人帮忙的基础上进一步提升请人帮忙的请求方式，运用Would you mind…？和Could you please……？进行课堂交际以及用便条的方式请求别人帮助。Section A运用would, could句型来表示有礼貌的请求和will表示未来的计划。Section B学会谈论自己最烦心事，以及学会对他人最烦心的是进行调查。Self-check 学会了解西方文化的内涵。
2.重点词汇： right away, wait in line ,cut in line ,break the rule, put out, keep……down, pick …… up
3.主要句型：
（1）。Would you please…？ You should……
（2）。 Could you please……？
（3）。 Would you mind……？
（4）。 Would you mind not……？
（5）。 P lease remember ……
（6）。Thank you very much.
二、教师指导
A:主题写作：本单元我们要写一张便条。
写作思路：便条包括留言，请假条，证明等。写时要注意以下几点：
1. 日期要写在右上角，但不必要像写信那样繁琐，只需写清月日期或星期几即可，也可省略。
2.称呼应写在第二行，顶格写，称呼可以比较随便。
3.正文要另起一行。用词通俗易懂，一般比较口语化，简单明了，写明情况即可。要注意若是请人帮忙或是请假，要语气委婉。
4.署名一般只写留言人的姓名即可。如果是请假条，则要署名正式些，一般表示尊重。
B: 注意事项：
1.本单元主要以便条的形式向别人抱怨某事或请求别人不要做某事或做某事。
2.语气委婉，词句简洁，尽量避免应酬语和各种敬词
3.切忌内容空洞、言不达意。
三。 范文赏读：
（1）Tony明天和父母去度假，他给朋友李雷留言。请求李雷帮助照顾一下他的家。内容包括，照看宠物，浇花等等。
Dear Li Lei,
My parents and I are going on vacation tomorrow. I need your help. Could you please help me to take care of my house? Could you please clean the house and water the flowers? I have a pet dog, you know. Would you mind feeding and bathing him when I’m out? You can take him for a walk and give him some water every evening.
Thank you very much.
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