概要:Dear Mum,I finished my end-of year exams last week and got my report card today. I always feel nervous when I got my report card, but luckily I did Ok this time. My Chinese teacher said I was the best in class, because I had a really hard time with it .But my worst report was from my math teacher. He said I was lazy. And my science teacher said I could do better. That’s all for my report card. Could you give me some advice ?Best wishes.Tom小试牛刀:John 是一位来自美国的交换生,他收到了班主任寄给他的期中评价报告单。假如你是Jo
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Dear Mum,
I finished my end-of year exams last week and got my report card today. I always feel nervous when I got my report card, but luckily I did Ok this time. My Chinese teacher said I was the best in class, because I had a really hard time with it .But my worst report was from my math teacher. He said I was lazy. And my science teacher said I could do better. That’s all for my report card. Could you give me some advice ?
Best wishes.
Tom
小试牛刀:
John 是一位来自美国的交换生,他收到了班主任寄给他的期中评价报告单。假如你是John, 请你根据以下提示给在美国的父母写封信,说说你的学习情况。(不少于80词)
Name: John
Chinesehard-working
Mathcan do better
Englishwell done
Sciencevery poor
Historygood
P.E.not active enough
Dear Mum and Dad,
How’s it going at home? I got my report card today.
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Well, that’s all about my studies for now!
Yours
John
Grade _______________ Date ____________________
纠正:__________________________________________________
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Unit 5 If you go to the party ,
you will have a great time !
一、单元分析
本单元是以“参加聚会”为话题,学习 if 引导的条件状语从句。在Section A中,涉及了三个话题:话题一:以不同的方式去参加聚会会出现的各种结果。话题二:在各种可能的时间举行一次班级聚会会出现的各种结果。话题三:在参加End of Year Party时如果不遵守聚会规则会出现的各种结果。Section B部分是知识的拓展和语言综合运用。该部分涉及了两个主要话题:加入或不加入专业足球队会出现的各种结果和是否成为一名专业运动员会出现的结果。并且从第二个话题延伸到写作训练。在Self check部分拓展了一些和日常生活紧密相关的话题,通过讨论这些话题对if引导的条件状语从句的结构和用法进一步加以巩固。
重要词汇:flower, against, chance, tonight, window, explain, improve,
take the bus, go to college, stay at home, ride my bike, ice cream, happy, famous
重要句子:
1. If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time .
2. Don’t bring …If you do , …
3. Remember to bring …
4. Please take…away.
5. Please turn…on/off.
二。写法指导
主题写作:本单元主要是用if 引导的条件状语从句来谈论未来的计划。
写作思路: 此类作文针对性比较强,要针对对方所遇的实际情况进行分析。
1.首先目标要明确,紧扣话题。
2. 要用对方能够接受的语言来描述,达到建议的目的。
3. 用最明了的语言,最顺畅自然地词、句、段去表达中心思想,贯穿材料。
三。 范文赏读
基础达标篇:There will be an English party from 5pm to 9 pm on Friday. You can come to the party with your friend. Here are some rules you must remember. Don’t bring food and drinks to the party. Don’t leave during the party. You mustn’t wear jeans. If you wear jeans, we won’t let you in. And please bring your ID card.
点评:
上面的这篇习作作者充分利用课本所学知识的整体叠加,中心突出,内容充实。充分练习了if引导的条件状语从句。
优秀篇:
Maybe I’ll become a teacher. If I become a teacher, I’ll work with children. I love children, so I’ll be happy. I will also be able to work outside sometimes. But I won’t be famous.
Maybe I’ll be a lawyer. If I become a lawyer. I’ll be able to help people. But I won’t be able to work outside and I won’t be able to work with children. I think I’ll be a teacher!
Maybe I'll become a doctor. If I become a doctor, I'll work with people who need help. I can help them ,so I'll be really happy.
四。 小试牛刀:
想一想以后如果你有了钱,你会用这些钱干什么?请根据所给的提示词,展开联想,以If I have a lot of money为题写一篇短文。
提示词汇:1.travel around the world
2.a big house, parents, a happy life, buy a car
3.charity, help poor students, go to school, get an education
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